Chris





its quite to quite BANG,BANG,BANG as I hit 1000 nails all around the hut. "ou" I hit my finger I can feel the blood rushing back into my finger. I scater into the house stand up on the chair grab all mums pictures hopeing she won't notice I sprint back to the tree house throw mums pictures up in throw the door SMASH "oh no" one has broken ah who care's ( mabey mum ) as i climb up in to the tree house i hang up all the pictures i can hear mum call out ( are you all right dear ) i call back ( yes) she calls back ( have you seen where my pictures have gone ) i call back ( mabey we've been robbed ) mum doesn't reply about 10 minutes later i can hear sirans going up and down the road they are getting closer and closer OH NO mum called the police || Until the 1970s, the Treaty was generally ignored by both the courts and parliment. any chiefs who didn't sign it still had to follow the rules. the treaty did not go right around the country so not all chiefs did not get to sign it. This day is now a public holiday in New Zealand. It takes its name from the place in the Bay of Islands where it was first signed. Different understandings of the Treaty have long been the subject of many debates The Treaty House is New Zealand's most-visited historic building. Well done Chris, great new knowledge here, relevant to your history. Next time remember to use capitals for the proper nouns ||
 * 8/11/12 || term 4 writing ||
 * || The smell of new wood fills the hut tools all over the ground
 * 21/02/2012 || waitangi day ||
 * || the treaty of waitangi was first signed on the 6 february 1840.

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 * 13/8/12 || explorer ||
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 * 13.8.12 || fore father ||
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This looks great Chris, good ideas for your performance task, have you made a decision of which area you will focus on? ||
 * 28/02/12 || * art
 * weapons
 * language
 * land
 * cheifs
 * maori tribs
 * population of maori people
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as your waliking through the paddock you and your little brother are running to the tree up ahead as it looks strange from were you are were at the tree and behind the tree is a long stream that you havn't seen before aidan qickley takes off you wonder what he's doing you see him runing back with somthing in his and he gives you a rope and you climb the tree and tie the rope to a brunch so when you swing on it you swing over the river and back you climb back down and aidan hops on to the swing one swing two swings and SNAP the rope snaped as he has fallen in the water rushing down stream you grab the bit of rope that has snaped and chuck it at aidan as your holding the other side he catches the rope but because he is panicing so much he accidently pulled you in as your gasping for air and tring to stay up the water goes in to a big pipe then just diserperes you tell him to hold on to me as tight as posible the you using to hands you grab onto the eadge of the pipe you tell him to climb over me and then pull me up as he pulls you up your using your feet to help he pulls you up on to the wet grass and you dont really dont care as your wet any way as your tring to breath again you say to aidan  i agree with him there ||
 * 12/03/12 || wet n wild ||
 * || waliking through the long wet grass crawling up your legs


 * 12/3/12 || goals for camp ||
 * || * play with people i wouldn't play with at school
 * achive all the activities
 * try new things
 * get to know people you dont know that well ||

of the pinaccles we could see for miles we could see the hut that we stayed at it was easy to come down than to go up when we were going up we came to a swing bridge i stood in the middle of the swing bridge and started to shake it that was fun jessie my friend walked with me to the top he counted 1162 stairs from the first lot of stars to the hut we were ||
 * 19/3/12 || best momet ever at camp ||
 * || the best time at camp was when we climb to the top

and i needed to slow down my talking i could have inproved this by slowind down and in the paragraphs i needed to put a fristly secondly and thrirdly in my paragraphs || A very honest reflection Chris, time connectives are very useful in a speech. Slowing down in important when presenting so the audience can clearly hear your reasons
 * 31,5,12 || speech reflection ||
 * || i think i did well on the infomation but i could have done beter on each paragraphs



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