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 * 8/3/12 || WET N' WILD. ||
 * || 'Hooray"! me and my brother had screamed,we are going to the lake.Today is our family day.We went to the lake and I saw a gush of green then we saw a little bit of orange it was the kayaks.We ran towards them and a man was standing there with a life jacket.We put them on and got into the kayak we started paddling out into the huge gush of green when I suddenly felt something swimming under my kayak It felt slimy when it came up againist my kayak . I told my brother so we stopped.I tried to look under my boat,but nothing was there me and my brother looked up and my parents weren't there they mustv'e carried on paddling we started to worry like a mother worried about her chiildren ,we carried on paddling and our parents were nowhere to be found .We started to worry even moer.We stopped for a little while and then my brother felt something swim under his kayak.I had seen his kayak go up and down like a mexican wave.He got a little bit frightened I said "everything is going to be okay".I tried to look and it was a long eel and a big one too.I said " let's try kayak back to the deck, so we tried and then I said "oh look there it is,STOP"! There it was the big eel eating a fish.We saw the deck but the eel was in front of the deck.I told my brother look mum and dad are there at the deck.My brother was yelling and the eel turned around ans saw us looking at him, So it got scared and swam off and it's very long tail hit my kayak and I fell into the water.I couldn't seem to swim back up to the because my leg got stuck on alot of seaweed and I was trying to untangle it but all of a sudden ,I lost my energy and blacked out and woke up at the deck.I got up and hugged my family in relief and safety. ||
 * 12/3/12 ||  ||
 * || MY LEARNING HERO. ||

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 * 12/3/12 || Camp Goals ||
 * || * Try to attempt every event including th pinicals.
 * Respect the supervisor for our group.
 * Be grateful for my cabinmates.
 * Have a great big smile on my face:) ||

Fineata Moala was born on january 8th 2000. She grew up in the town the area of Levin. At age 4 Fineata had participated in white sunday (a very special thing for her) fineata atendes Waiau Pa School at age 11. She joined the Conservation group, Marimba and got chosen to be a school leader at age 12. As her grandad did in 2006 she got given a necklace ot symbolyse her grandad. fineata is interrested ||
 * 2/4/12 || fineata moala ||
 * || Fineata is a 12 year old girl from franklin aukland with her Mum, Dad and younger brother. She was born in Palmerston North bred in Levin and moved up to Auckland in 2010.

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 * 13/3/12 || Camp 2012 ||
 * || "OHHHHH" ! "this is soooo hard".Today we are climbing up the Pinicals everybody is behind us looks exhausted.We where in groups well at least we were ,some people were walking and didn't even realise that their parent supervisor was walking all the way in the front.I was so tired I felt like I wanted to sleep on the ground but I kept going .As I was walking I kept on saying Take a risks just so everyone in my group could keep going so I was encouraging but I also have a feeling that I wasn't saying it aloud .I asked Mrs Eden if we were going to stop soon and she said that we are going to stop at the hydro camp I said "yes" we were just walking around a bunch of trees and Mrs Eden said "here we are ". I threw my bag on the ground and felt relieved.Once we finished eating lunch we went off in groups.Once we saw the Pinicals I said"if that is the pinicals then what was what we just hiked up".I felt bilked just a moment there but then we walked up to the pinicals and the view was beautiful and amazing I was actually quite speechless. ||

Good reflection Fineata, this will help you ensure paragraphs are clearer in the future
 * 31/5/12 || Speech Reflection ||
 * || I think what I did well on my speech is my time connectives ,But what I thought I needed to improve on was to enough facts to back up my opinions.If I could change my speech I would cahnge maybe my first and second Paragragh because on the day of speech finals in class I read my speech in my head and it sort of didn't make sense because in the first paragragh it was about money / families then my secong paragragh was sort of the exact same thing . ||
 * 2/4/12 || Wordle ||
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 * 13/8/12 || Tagxedo spelling ||
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 * 8/11/12 || Term 4 Writing sample ||
 * || "Scchhup sccchhupp" the sound of the blankets dragging accross the carpet can be very annoying.The walls are forming very slowely with a blue wall, then a green,red and pink ,but when you're inside it's not really noticeable.My cousins and I are breathing really heavily like a herd of bulls thumping towards you.Then, finally the last touch a cuishion ,we crawl through the big doors and see a sevant waiting for us with a cools drink,It smells stuffy and feels hot.We can hear our little cousin tramping towards our big ,huge door and we start yelling "stay away".We order our army to attack.The feeling of the carpet om my palm feels rough.We stop and hear screaming,we shout our walls collapse and our castle is slowely falling,when all the blankets fall down ,the sun shining brightly through the windoe is very bright ,you can see all the colours of the blankets falling and guess who is standing there giggling .You guessed it our little annoying cousin .We all scream "ATTACK" and run after her. ||