Bailey+A

HOMEWORK Screech. The car had just parked and we were unloading our bogie boards. The sun was shining high in the sky and the water was as flat as paper. I ran onto the shore and splashed into the water. The water was warm from the suns heat. I lay on my bogie board when the clouds started coming in. I sat up, that’s when the clouds started coming in. I sat up, that’s when I realised I had been travelling out. I could hear mum calling me from the beach. I tried swimming to her when I got stuck in a rip. Every second I travelled a meter. I am still in the rip. I am starting to panic now; the shore was now out of sight. My heart was pumping very fast when I saw it, just ahead, a shark fin. My heart is pumping so fast now it feels like it is coming to burst out of my chest when, AAaargh. The shark bit my leg off. I screamed in pain. Blood was everywhere now. I tried to stay awake but it was no use, I blacked out. I could hear the faint sound of a chopper somewhere around me. Next I woke up; i was in a rescue helicopter. My leg had bed covered with plaster. The helicopter men asked what my parent’s phone number was. I told them and they phoned mum and told her what had happened. I could hear a scream on the other end of the phone. In seconds i was at middlemore hospital. There they gave me some sleepy gas and i went to sleep. Then i woke up, i was lying in bed. I thought what a horrid nightmare. Mum then came bursting in saying "Were going to the beach!" || Performance task
 * Thursday 8th march || Wet'n Wild
 * 12.3.12 || Camp Goals ||
 * Try all the activitys || Have fun ||
 * Work well with others || Do all my jobs without any complants ||

Aarchery || Now my turn is over my turn is over. I'm waiting in line for my next turn. Then finally my second turn i aim the bow then fire "FOOOTTTT" sadly it flies over the topmy next turn wasnt much better. Then our turn is up and we leave to lunch. ||
 * = 19.3.12 ||~ CAMP ACTIVITES
 * ~  || " PING" went the string on the bow. I aimed for the middle almost there ,its moving like its in slow motion. "FOOOTTTT" it went to low. I am now having my second shot with the bow and arrow. This time i actually got the target but not in the bulls eye. The parent superviser said that I had good aim but just had to aim a bit more to the left.

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i could do better on my timing i would change someof my conclusion because it wasnt long enough || Bailey this is very brief, how did you do well in paragraph one? and what would you add to your conclusion to make it longer?
 * ~ 30/05/12 ||~ speech reflection ||
 * ~  || I think i did well on the first paragraph


 * 8.11.12 || My Hut ||
 * || "CRACK". "What was that?" I say as we start to build our hut. “I don’t know but let’s check it out.” Said Hamish. We start to run through the passage of painful sticks and twigs to get to the wider area of trees. I spot a large fallen branch in the perfect position for a hut.” There.” I say as I point to the branch “We could build a hut there”. They obviously think that my idea is good because they start to collect longish sticks. I trail off while the other two continue building the hut. I start to build another hut across the other side of the dry lakebed. I start with a tepee design and with a stick at the front that splits into two prongs just big enough to be the entrance to the hut. Than is start looking for smaller sticks and started layering them around the outside the hut. Once I had finished that I threw some pine needles on the sides to make it a little bit more water proof. I crawled inside and it was just big enough to stand up in with my head facing down. After I crawl out I grab some grassy stuff and throw it into the tepee to make a soft carpet instead of hard dirt. I turn around and the other hut is HUGE! I go inside and it is a large room. I turn out of the room and the other two were sharpening sticks till they were like spears. Jaydon throws his and it hits my hut and makes it fall to the ground and I am about to shout at Jaydon but my watch beeps signalling that it is time to go home. ||